Poem 2 (michael)

I know it's not right
It's not what I should say
but i love you michael
more and more each day

Sometimes i try to let you go
ley my heart be free
But i just can't do it michael
You have this hold on me

My friends all laugh
your a fool they tease
but how can I help it
when your laugh brings me to my knees

Your smile it gives me butterflies
your touch it makes me weak
and you always seem to make me giddy
everytime you speak

all this love i have for you though
it has nowhere to go
for i can never be yours
she is yours, i know

Poem 1 (feelings)

How do i explain these feelings?
Deep inside of me
Why is it that I can't explain
How they won't just let me be

I try and try and try and try
To make them go away
But I just can't seem to help it
I think they are hear to stay

Sometimes i feel happier
And i think I'm finally free
But then something happens
and they have me back in captivity

Noone can ever quite understand
nor can they explain
This cloud hanging over me
Which causes me so much pain

Sometimes they say it's all in my head
Like somehow it's my fault
But I can't just be like them
And lock thses feelings in a vault

No, I show my feelings
Though i wish i didn't
I guess it's just my cross to bear
and I'll keep living with it

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